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假定你是廈門日報的一名記者。今天上午你在去采訪的路上看到以下的情景�，F(xiàn)在你回到了報社，對這件事情深有感觸，請你根據(jù)所發(fā)生的事情，以“A good example for us”為題寫成一篇報道。(詞數(shù)120左右)

時間：今天上午10時左右

事件：一起車禍。一輛小轎車撞上了一輛自行車。騎自行車的人受重傷在地，頭部流血，動彈不得。在場的旁觀者有的不知所措，有的在猶豫是否出手相助。傷者情況危急。幸運的是，一個恰好路過的年輕人看到當時的情況，及時實施急救，并撥打了求救電話。在醫(yī)護人員到達之前，傷者失血不多，情況明顯好轉(zhuǎn)。

注意：

展開想象：(1)簡述受傷者的情形；(2)簡述救人者所實施的有針對性的急救方法

稱贊年輕人的品質(zhì)，號召人們像他學習助人為樂的精神，并強調(diào)急救知識的重要性。

注意時態(tài)、過渡詞、連接詞和句型的使用；不能逐字翻譯。

詞匯提示：handkerchief(n．手帕)；hesitate(v．猶豫)；urgent(adj．緊急的)

A Good Example For Us

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A Good Example For Us 　　About 10 a. m., on my way to cover an event， I saw a terrible accident that had happened on the road．A car hit a bike and the rider was severely injured．Besides, his head was badly bleeding．Urgent though the situation was, people looking on both sides of the road were at loss．There were also some people who hesitate whether to help the victim or not．It seemed that nobody in the crowd around him knew what to do with it．Fortunately, a young man who was just passing by came up to the injured．He calmly pulled a handkerchief out of his pocket and dressed the wound．And he pressed it very hard so as to stop the bleeding．Meanwhile, he called 120 for help in no time． 　　With the young man’s first aid, the rider didn’t lose too much blood before the doctors came and he felt much better．What a young man he was! He has done the right thing at the right time! It was he who saved the rider’s precious life．Obviously, he set an good example to us, which encourage everyone of us to learn how to perform first aid because it is of great importance for our daily life．