Question

假設(shè)你是李華，2014年冬奧會(huì)就要到了，學(xué)校就My favorite sport開展征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿。
1. 介紹你喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；2. 喜歡這一運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目的理由；3. 做運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)要注意的事項(xiàng)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100----120左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

My favorite sport
Though there are different kinds of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents when I was five years old.
Swimming is a really good sport. It makes me feel relaxed. This sport can make me stay healthy and strong, because I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.
Before going to swim, we should pay attention to three points. The first is to make your body in a better state. The second is that do not eat too much. The last is that you had better swim with some friends. These can help you stay safe and enjoy yourself.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)以外，還要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：pay attention to注意，stay safe保持安全，范文中的句式多變，運(yùn)用不同的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：  Though there are different kinds of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents when I was five years old.這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， This sport can make me stay healthy and strong, because I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.這句話用了every time引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句， The first is to make your body in a better state.這句話用了不定式做表語(yǔ)， The second is that do not eat too much. The last is that you had better swim with some friends. 這兩句話用了表語(yǔ)從句。