假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Today I'd like to tell you something that I experience in the City Park. In the afternoon of last Sunday, my friend and I were taking a walk along a river in the City Park, when suddenly we heard a boy call for help in the river. We jumped into the river or pulled the boy out. Then we made him to breathe using the mouth－to－mouth way.Before the boy came to himself, we sent her to hospital at once and telephoned his parents.The boy was saved. His parents were very thankful us and the doctors thought high of our first aid. We realized that knowing first aid is very help and important because it can help you to save lives.

1.experience改成experienced

2.In---On

3.call--- calling

4.or--- and

5.去掉him后面的 to

6.Before--- After

7.her---him

8.thankful后面加to

9.high--- highly

10.help--- helpful

【解析】

1.1】此處講的是上星期天上午的事，所以用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把experience改成experienced。

2.2】在某一天的上午、下午、晚上用介詞On ，故把In改成On。

3.3】突然聽(tīng)到一個(gè)男孩在河邊求救，hear sb. doing 聽(tīng)見(jiàn)某人正在做某事，故把call改成 calling。

4.4】此處表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，“我們跳進(jìn)河里把他拉出來(lái)”。故把or改成and。

5.5】make sb.do sth.suoyi1去掉him后面的 to.

6.6】根據(jù)句意“男孩蘇醒以后，我們立刻把他送到醫(yī)院”。故把Before改成After。

7.7】因?yàn)榍懊嫣岬绞且粋�(gè)男孩，所以把her改成him。

8.8】固定搭配be thankful to sb.對(duì)某人感謝，故在thankful后面加to。

9.9】固定搭配think highly of 高度評(píng)價(jià)，副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把high改成highly。

10.10】be動(dòng)詞后面用形容詞作表語(yǔ)，故把help改成helpful。

11.1】experience改成experienced

12.2】In---On

13.3】call--- calling

14.4】or--- and

15.5】去掉him后面的 to

16.6】Before--- After

17.7】her---him

18.8】thankful后面加to

19.9】high--- highly

20.10】help--- helpful

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。

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