Question

10．假定你是李華，一位熱衷中國文化的美國朋友James來信想了解你最近參加的一次校園"詩詞大會"（PoetryConference）活動．請用英文給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．活動目的（走進(jìn)中國詩詞，感受傳統(tǒng)文化…）
2．活動內(nèi)容（詩歌誦讀、古詩詞欣賞…）
3．活動體驗（…）注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear James，
Glad to share with you my latest participation in School Poetry Conference．（點明書信主題）Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（活動目的）During the activity，we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways．Meanwhile，we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction．（活動內(nèi)容）For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．【高分句型二】（自己的活動體驗）
Do you havesome similar activities？Please introduce one to me next time．（想要了解對方這一方面的活動）
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇介紹校園"詩詞大會"活動的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用一般過去時態(tài)和第一人稱．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信主題；二活動目的；三活動內(nèi)容；四自己的活動體驗；五想要了解對方這一方面的活動．
高分句型：
1．Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．句子里謂語動詞aims to 表示"目的在于"； approach into表示"接近"；form a better understanding of表示"對于某事形成更好的理解"．
基本上來說，這個活動的目的在于提供給我們更接近中國詩詞的機會，并且有助于我們對于中國傳統(tǒng)文化形成更好的理解．
2．For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指a meaningful experience；as well as 表示"也包括"．
對我來說，這是一次有意義的經(jīng)歷，這次經(jīng)歷結(jié)果是一次進(jìn)入中國文化和我們內(nèi)心世界的奇妙之旅．

解答 Dear James，
    Glad to share with you my latest participation in School Poetry Conference．（點明書信主題）Basically，the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（活動目的）During the activity，we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways．Meanwhile，we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction．（活動內(nèi)容）For me，it was a meaningful experience，which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves．【高分句型二】（自己的活動體驗）
     Do you have some similar activities？Please introduce one to me next time．（想要了解對方這一方面的活動）
                                                                        Yours，
                                                                   Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作時，考生不能遺漏要點要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)．考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢．動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．