Question

假如你是一名高三年級學(xué)生。你發(fā)現(xiàn)班上有些同學(xué)晚上學(xué)習(xí)到深夜，白天也不安排休息時(shí)間，但往往課堂上昏昏欲睡；有些同學(xué)飲食習(xí)慣不好，不吃早餐。請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上勸同學(xué)們合理安排作息時(shí)間，注意健康飲食,保證學(xué)習(xí)好、身體好。
注意：發(fā)言稿須包含上述要點(diǎn)，但可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使講話完整通順。

Answer 1

Dear classmates:
It’s a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently, I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day. So they often cannot help falling asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.
In my opinion, it’s extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet. We must learn to make wise use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit and study well. I wonder if you agree with me.
Thank you for listening!

解析試題分析：本文是關(guān)于高三學(xué)生要有良好的生活習(xí)慣和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，只需要翻譯即可，在寫作的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，也要選擇較為高級的短語如fall asleep等較好的句型來提高文章的文采。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)不能省略，要完全包括在內(nèi)。要注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯和短語，也可以使用不同的句式。本文還要注意所選詞要符合發(fā)言稿的特點(diǎn)，要求口語化。