Question

書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)閱讀下面一則短信(message)：

　　中國人在食品里完成了化學(xué)教育。從大米里認(rèn)識(shí)了石蠟；從火腿里認(rèn)識(shí)了敵敵畏；從咸鴨蛋、辣椒里認(rèn)識(shí)了蘇丹紅；從銀耳、蜜棗里認(rèn)識(shí)了硫磺。今天三鹿奶粉又讓中國人知道了三聚氰胺(melamine)……

　　食品安全(food safety)已經(jīng)給中國人的健康敲響了警鐘，談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識(shí)。

詞數(shù)：100左右。

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Answer 1

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解析：

　　One possible version：

　　From the message mentioned above, we can see that food safety has gradually drawn people's attention．

　　Why do the immoral phenomena happen so frequently in China?Driven by profits, some illegal businessmen add poisonous stuff like melamine to food regardless of people's health and safety．What they do has violated laws and regulations．Additionally, some relevant departments fail to supervise them effectively…Actually, only a small number of manufacturers have been fined, giving rise to such terrible events as listed in the above message．

　　In my opinion, apart from profits, manufacturers should bear some social responsibilities．Meanwhile, government should spare no efforts to regulate the market of food and laws must be passed to limit and regulate the food safety．Solving the problem needs the joint efforts of the whole society．Only in this way can we prevent the tough, disturbing problems from happening again．