Question

假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件：
未及時(shí)回信的原因；
你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150；
2 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your email, and I am sorry I couldn’t reply in time since I have been preparing for the final exam recently. In your email, you asked me about my plan of the summer holidays. If it comes to a choice, I prefer to go travelling.
First, I would spend a couple of days in Japan not only to enjoy the delicious food, but to learn about people from a different cultural background. Second, walking through a well-known national park is another must on my list, where I can appreciate the creations of nature and relax myself. Finally, I would visit some museums which should not be missed to broaden my horizon as well as enriching my knowledge.
All in all, travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. Let’s just pack our suitcases and start our trip!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是篇郵件應(yīng)用文，內(nèi)容提示較簡潔，只是框架，但學(xué)生容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。人稱用第一和第二人稱。根據(jù)寫作要求文章分三段來寫。第一段首先對(duì)不能及時(shí)回復(fù)郵件表示歉意并表明原因，之后提出自己的打算。第二段重點(diǎn)描述自己的具體計(jì)劃和想法。第三段總結(jié)全文。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如in time, prefer to go travelling, cultural background, broaden one’s horizon, enrich one’s knowledge等。還運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)since I have been preparing for the final exam recently；to do做目的狀語not only to enjoy the delicious food, but to learn about people from a different cultural background；定語從句where I can appreciate the creations of nature and relax myself；which should not be missed to broaden my horizon as well as enriching my knowledge.等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：first, second, finally, all in all等。