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6．假如你叫李華，暑假即將來臨．你班同學(xué)討論了假期計(jì)劃，提出了不同看法，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇記述討論內(nèi)容的英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶�，文章開頭已給出．
優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)
呆在家中舒適，能好好休息，和親人、同學(xué)相聚失去開闊眼界的機(jī)會(huì)
外出旅游有機(jī)會(huì)和不同的人交流，豐富自己的經(jīng)歷花費(fèi)多，旅途不便
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3．參考詞匯：開闊眼界 broaden horizon
The summer holiday is coming．Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．After a tiring term，they believe it isa convenient and comfortable way to relax．Besides，it's traditional for them to get together with friends and relatives．But they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for travelling．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge andbroadentheir horizons．However，it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well．
In my view．It will be better to stay at home．For I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework．We can do anything that we want to do，such as reading book watchingTVand helping parents do housework．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇討論了假期計(jì)劃的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明文章的主題；二呆在家中和外出旅游兩種計(jì)劃的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．After a tiring term，they believe it is a convenient and comfortable way to relax．句子里 it做賓語從句的主語，代指旅行； to relax是動(dòng)詞不定式做 a convenient and comfortable way 的定語； convenient 表示"便利的"．
在勞累的一個(gè)學(xué)期之后，他們相信這是一個(gè)能夠放松的便利又舒適的方法．
2．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons句子里動(dòng)名詞短語meeting different people 做賓語從句的主語，表示"遇見不同的人"； broaden their horizons表示"拓寬他們的眼界"．
他們認(rèn)為遇見不同的人會(huì)增加他們的知識(shí)，拓寬他們的眼界．

解答 The summer holiday is coming． Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday．（點(diǎn)明文章的主題）
    Some are in favor of staying at home．After a tiring term，they believe it is a convenient and comfortable way to relax．【高分句型一】Besides，it's traditional for them to get together with friends and relatives．But they will lose the chance of getting experience of the outside world．However，others prefer to go out for travelling．They think meeting different people will increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．【高分句型二】However，it will surely take a lot of money and the trips may cause some inconvenience as well．（呆在家中和外出旅游兩種計(jì)劃的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)）
   In my view．It will be better to stay at home．For I can do whatever I like and help my parents with the housework．We can do anything that we want to do，such as reading book watching TV and helping parents do housework．（自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全．通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，列出寫作提綱．在體裁明確、中心突出、要點(diǎn)清晰的前提下，應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點(diǎn)逐條表達(dá)出來．表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)該綜合運(yùn)用所掌握的知識(shí)，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語的干擾，按照英語的習(xí)慣方式，用地道的英語表達(dá)出來，力求做到語言準(zhǔn)確無誤．