Question

今年十月黃金周旅游異�；鸨�，由此也引起了人們的大量討論。前不久，相關(guān)部門針對(duì)黃金周的去留問題，在網(wǎng)上征集意見。下面是一個(gè)對(duì)10，000個(gè)網(wǎng)民所作的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你把調(diào)查的結(jié)果用英語寫成短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎú坏蒙儆趦牲c(diǎn)），發(fā)表在學(xué)校的報(bào)刊上。

觀點(diǎn)	原因
贊成長假期（45%）	假期集中，方便出外旅游，盡情放松；更多時(shí)間與家人一起。
取消長假期（55%）	容易造成交通阻塞，甚至交通事故；人流量大，對(duì)景點(diǎn)保護(hù)不利；各項(xiàng)服務(wù)質(zhì)量下降。

 
注意：1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。短文中開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。
3.參考詞匯：網(wǎng)民—Netizen   
Not long ago, opinions were collected on line about whether “Golden Week” should be kept or adjusted.                                                

Answer 1

Not long ago, opinions were collected on line about whether “Golden Week” should be kept or adjusted. Ten thousand Netizens took part in this investigation. Here are the results.
45% of the surveyed people hope to keep “Golden Week”. They think a long holiday not only provides them with adequate time for a trip but also they can relax themselves completely. What’s more, with a long holiday, they have more fun staying with the family.
However, 55% of the people think “Golden Week” should be canceled. They indicate that during the long holiday, there are more traffic jams and even traffic accidents. In addition, the crowded people gathering in some famous places has caused damage to the relics and led to poor service quality.
In my opinion, …

試題分析：本為屬于考生很熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來，考生只需要把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英文即可，難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)出所需要的語義。在寫作的時(shí)候要選擇自己能夠運(yùn)用的句型靈活表達(dá)，不要總是使用陳述句，可以變換著使用倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等讓文章充滿變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于正反觀點(diǎn)的議論文，話題與學(xué)生的生活息息相關(guān)，考生有話可說。難度在于表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞如worse still , after all等把要點(diǎn)連接成段落，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體。