Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加 、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處）不計分。

I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（執(zhí)業(yè)者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.” Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.

Answer 1

1.把in改為on

2.把go改為going

3.把careful改為carefully

4.把in case of去掉of

5.把finished改為finishing

6.把so改為but

7.把reply改為replied

8.把a改為the

9.把they改為you

10.把extremely serious前面加上was

【解析】

1. day I was in the phone…在打電話句式是on the phone。故把in改為on

2. day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment.這里go over the details of an appointment是用作主句的狀語，要用現(xiàn)在分詞形式，故把go改為going

3. careful wrote down her address…。careful adj. 仔細的，小心的；carefully是careful的副詞形式，這里是修飾動詞wrote down，要用副詞形式。故把careful改為carefully

4. case of去掉of；第三句…and the set time in case of I forgot.。in case of萬一，假設(shè)，以防，介詞短語，后面要接名詞或名詞性從句。in case萬一；假使，是連詞，后面連接句子，而句中I forgot是一個主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的簡單句，要用in case。故把in case of去掉of

5. were just finished the conversation …，finish 完成，結(jié)束。結(jié)束對話短語是finish the conversation，而We和finished the conversation是主動關(guān)系，故把finished改成finishing

6. hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question。 so， conj. 所以，因此，表示因果關(guān)系、承接或遞進關(guān)系。but conj. 但是，而是，然而，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。這句話譯為：我希望你不要介意，但是我有一件相當奇怪的問題。故把so改為but

7. course” I reply.從前文可知這里講述的是一個過去發(fā)生的故事，因此，敘述要用過去式。故把reply改為replied

8. said a lady 。the是定冠詞，一般用于特指的名詞前；a是不定冠詞，一般用于泛指。這里是特指跟我打電話的這位女士，故把a改為the

9. was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.這里是一位女士在電話里跟我提問題，人稱應(yīng)該是“你們”。故把they改為you

10. serious前面加上was；最后一句Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.這個句子前面部分是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。而that從句中，缺少謂語，extremely serious是形容詞短語，故要有be動詞，已知是過去時態(tài)，要用was。故把extremely serious前面加上was

考點：考查考點：考查介詞，副詞，連詞，人稱，固定短語等一些語法知識。