Question

假設(shè)你是Li Hua，昨天是你18歲的生日，請根據(jù)下列要點，用英語寫一篇日記。
要點：
1. 簡要描述慶祝生日的時間、地點、方式和參加對象；
2．描述讓你最感動的一個場景；
3．最后寫出你的感受。
注意：
1.內(nèi)容積極向上，語意連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。詞數(shù)100左右；
2．不能寫成詩歌形式；不能使用具體的人名和地名；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
March 11,2010  Fine
Yesterday was my 18^th birthday.___________________________
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Answer 1

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March 11,2010 Fine
Yesterday was my 18th birthday. As Father and Mother thought it was a big occasion for me，they suggested I hold a birthday party at home to celebrate it. For several days they had been busy preparing for this. By 4 o’clock I was pleased to see all my friends had come. Mother cooked us a big meal.
We ate and talked happily. The most exciting moment was when Mother put a big birthday cake on the table and all my friends began to sing HappyBirthday. Seeing the 18 candles burning，I couldn’t keep back my tears. Mother asked me to make a wish before I blew out all the candles. After that，everyone enjoyed the sweet birthday cake and shared my happiness.
I am eighteen years old now，which means I’ve become an adult and have more responsibilities .I’ll do my best to return my parents’ love and live up to their expectations.

解析試題分析：英文日記屬于應(yīng)用文的一種，日記是記敘當(dāng)天自己親身經(jīng)歷的一些重要的、有意義的事情。因此，在寫作時應(yīng)注意日記必須用第一人稱"I"進(jìn)行敘述。另外，由于日記中所記敘的事情已經(jīng)發(fā)生，所以整篇日記的時態(tài)常用過去時態(tài)。當(dāng)然，在直接引語中或在表示客觀真理或事實時仍然要用一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作前都要注意仔細(xì)審題，抓住要點，理清敘述的順序。寫作時正文的開頭一般不用寫表示日期的句子，因為日記中已有日期，再寫就重復(fù)了。應(yīng)注意英文日記的格式。
考點：提綱作文。
點評：文后發(fā)表感想或評論可用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)或?qū)�來時態(tài)。記日記力求簡單明了，有連貫性。日記應(yīng)以時間發(fā)生的先后順序來展開，并且要簡明扼要，條理清楚，寫出真實感。日記分為記事型、議論型、描寫型和抒情型。記事型是用英語記述當(dāng)天自己生活學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)生的事情。議論型是對生活中的某一事情或情況現(xiàn)象談自己的看法，發(fā)表議論。描寫型或抒情型，則是對某人物或事物的特征做細(xì)致的描述，或針對某事物抒發(fā)自己的感情。