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7．假設你是高二學生李華，看到很多同學因為學習而忽略了體育鍛煉，打算給學校英語報社投稿，鼓勵同學們加強體育鍛煉，注重身體健康．請按照以下要點，以"Health and Sports"為題寫一篇英語短文．
寫作要點：
1．身體健康的重要性；
2．運動對大家的好處：
3．你的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Health and Sports
Good health is of vital importance to everyone．A healthy person can always be energetic and enjoy his life．A person who is in poor health cannot work well．（高分句型一）
When it comes to keeping healthy，playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people．（高分句型二） As high school students，we must study hard and take many important exams，which may make many students feel nervous．（高分句型三）So it's necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress．Physical exercise can help make muscles strong．What's more，while playing，we get relaxed，which can help us study more efficiently．（高分句型四）
Since sports can make us physically and mentally healthy，we should do sports every day no matter how busy we are．Do remember that good health is the best wealth．．

Answer 1

分析 1．此書面表達可分為三部分來寫．第一部分：根據(jù)自己的見解陳述身體健康的重要性，比如身體健康的人對生活充滿激情，而不健康的人不能好好工作；第二部分介紹運動的重要性，比如運動可以減緩壓力，強身健體，學習很有效率等；第三部分就加強鍛煉給出自己的建議，比如每天堅持運動等．
2．文章時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱．
3．可使用的句型有：限制性定語從句和非限制性定語從句；原因狀語從句和強調(diào)句等．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：poor health：身體狀態(tài)不好；keep healthy：保持健康；play sports：做運動；exercise regularly：規(guī)律地運動．
A person who is in poor health cannot work well．（高分句型一）
  When it comes to keeping healthy，playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people．（高分句型二）
As high school students，we must study hard and take many important exams，which may make many students feel nervous．（高分句型三）
What's more，while playing，we get relaxed，which can help us study more efficiently．（高分句型四）

解答 Health and Sports
       Good health is of vital importance to everyone．A healthy person can always be energetic and enjoy his life．A person who is in poor health cannot work well．（高分句型一）
       When it comes to keeping healthy，playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people．（高分句型二） As high school students，we must study hard and take many important exams，which may make many students feel nervous．（高分句型三）So it's necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress．Physical exercise can help make muscles strong．What's more，while playing，we get relaxed，which can help us study more efficiently．（高分句型四）
      Since sports can make us physically and mentally healthy，we should do sports every day no matter how busy we are．Do remember that good health is the best wealth．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．