Question

最近我校對高一學(xué)生入學(xué)一學(xué)期后的學(xué)習(xí)生活適應(yīng)情況做了一個調(diào)查，情況如下。請你用英語表達下表的調(diào)查結(jié)果，并提出個人觀點。

60%左右的學(xué)生認為	40%左右的學(xué)生認為	我的觀點
1. 高中學(xué)習(xí)很有壓力； 2. 科目難度大，課后作業(yè)多； 3. 沒時間參加鍛煉等活動	1. 適應(yīng)并喜歡高中生活； 2. 課程更有趣，活動更豐富，受益匪淺。	……

要求：    1. 詞數(shù)120；    2. 文章開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：course 課程

Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has

become used to the life in senior high school. ­­                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows: Firstly the subject they are learning now are obviously more different. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.

On the contrary, others say they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.

As far as I’m concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything effectively. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作屬于典型的議論文文體，將文章分成“三段式”來表示觀點。首先對60%的高一學(xué)生的觀點進行闡述，表示他們認為高一生活一點也不輕松About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing.再分別對三點原因進行闡述，注意使用表示層次關(guān)系的詞，如besides.然后對相反的觀點進行陳述On the contrary，引出不同的觀點，同樣對所列舉的兩點原因進行闡述。最后表達自己的觀點，我們應(yīng)該平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動的時間we should balance our study and other activities.同時對文章進行總結(jié)Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.點名題意。

考點：提綱類寫作

點評：本文的寫作不難，對于敘事類文體，對文章的條理性要把握好，在寫作過程注意使用“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的詞語或是句型表達，多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應(yīng)該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。