短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿(mǎn)分10分）

假段定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有

10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意： 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become hikers, who are calling Donkey Friends (驢友) in Chinese. A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacation can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

1.calling 改為called.

2.has held 間加been

3.to feel 改為feel

4.deep 改為deeply

5.relaxing 改 為 relaxed

6.have been happened 中的been 去掉

7.because 后加of

8.life 改為lives

9.so 改為 such

10.which 改為 that

【解析】

1.“人們”和“稱(chēng)呼”是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，現(xiàn)在分詞. calling 改為called.

2.“討論”和“舉行”是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，has held 間加been。

3.】make somebody do something讓某人做某事，因此 to feel 改為feel 。

4.】副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，“深深地”修飾“吸引” deep 改為deeply。

5.】人做主語(yǔ)用ed形式，物做主語(yǔ)用ing形式。他們做主語(yǔ)因此relaxing 改 為 relaxed。

6.】“發(fā)生”沒(méi)有被動(dòng)形式，因此 have been happened 中的been 去掉。

7.因?yàn)檫h(yuǎn)足知識(shí)的缺乏，because of加名詞，因此.because 后加of。

8.】主語(yǔ)是復(fù)數(shù)形式，失去他們的生命也用復(fù)數(shù)形式，life 改為lives。

9.】such+冠詞+形容詞+名詞或such +形容詞+名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，因此 so 改為 such。

10.】名詞“建議”后面是同位語(yǔ)從句，解釋名詞的內(nèi)容，只起連接作用用that，which 改為 that。

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