Question

17．閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事．
注意：1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；
2．應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語．
Mr．Brown lived in a house less than two miles from his office，so he was able to drive home every day for lunch．Every time he drove home at noon，he found many cars were parked outside his house and there was no room for his own car．He had to drive somewhere else to park his car．Then he had to walk back home．This made him very angry．
He had put up a board，which said，"No parking"in the garden facing the road，but nobody noticed it．People seemed to obey（遵守） only a police notice ，but not a private one．There were no parked cars where there was a blue board with letters on it：Police Notice--No Parking!
Mrs．Brown suggested that he could steal a police notice．He dared not，being afraid of going to prison．She then suggested that he could make one just like a police notice．He said he was not a policeman and couldn't use the word"police"．Several days later，Mr．Brown made a blue board with white letters：
Polite Notice--No Parking!
"Oh!"Mrs．Brown said，"You told me you weren't going to use the word"police"，but why do you use it now？""Really？"he asked，"Look again．"She started to laugh．"You are really clever．"

Paragraph 1：
Why did Mrs Brown say her husband was really rather clever？Because she found that he had written a notice which looked exactly like a police notice．He made a blue board with white letters on it，but it was not a real one．Being afraid of going to prison，Mr Brown certainly dared not use the word"police"，but he used"polite notice"instead of"police notice"．He was quite clever，wasn't he？
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If the police discovered that the Browns were using a police notice…they would feel angry and punish them．It was a crime because he offended the police，passing himself off as a policeman．But Mr Brown would remain very calm and ask the policemen to look at the board carefully．The policemen would burst out laughing when they realized what had happened．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Being afraid of going to prison，Mr Brown certainly dared not use the word"police"，but he used"polite notice"instead of"police notice
警察會大笑，當他們意識到發(fā)生了什么事（高分句型一）．．
高分句型二：
The policemen would burst out laughing when they realized what had happened．
警察會大笑，當他們意識到發(fā)生了什么事（高分句型一）．．

解答 Why did Mrs Brown say her husband was really rather clever？Because she found that he had written a notice which looked exactly like a police notice．He made a blue board with white letters on it，but it was not a real one．Being afraid of going to prison，Mr Brown certainly dared not use the word"police"，but he used"polite notice"instead of"police notice"（高分句型一）．He was quite clever，wasn't he？
If the police discovered that the Browns were using a police notice，they would feel angry and punish them．It was a crime because he offended the police，passing himself off as a policeman．But Mr Brown would remain very calm and ask the policemen to look at the board carefully．警察會大笑，當他們意識到發(fā)生了什么事（高分句型一）（高分句型一）．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．