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1．近期，由董卿主持的《朗讀者》節(jié)目廣受歡迎，其中的兩封家書更是引起觀眾的關(guān)注．為此，許多人提議在生活中應(yīng)使用手寫書信作為交流工具．此提議在你校學(xué)生中引起廣泛討論．請(qǐng)你結(jié)合圖表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．

支持理由	1．手寫信有助于表達(dá)情感； 2．手寫信有助于規(guī)范學(xué)生書寫；
反對(duì)理由	1．手寫信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和紙張； 2．手寫信已過(guò)時(shí)；
你的觀點(diǎn)	1… 2…

 
 注意：
1）作文應(yīng)涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意銜接與連貫．
2）詞數(shù)150詞左右．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
With the program Readers becoming popular recently，two handwritten letters read in it drew the audience's attention．
Many people suggest that we should communicate by writing letters，which has caused a heated discussion among students in our school．（高分句型一）Students'opinions vary．
70% of the students are in favor of it．On one hand，handwritten letters can help students express their feelings better while communicating with others．On the other hand，bywriting letters，students can practise their handwriting well，which is very beneficial totheir future development．（高分句型二）
However，30% of the students are against it．For one thing，it's a waste of time and paper for students to write letters．For another，they hold the view that handwritten letters are out of date，which should be given up．（高分句型三）
On my personal note，it is a good tradition that we need to hold on to．What's more，letters are easy to store，which will become great treasures for us to value when we memorize our past in the future．（高分句型四）（151 words）．

Answer 1

分析 文章是結(jié)合圖表就使用手寫書信作為交流工具的討論寫篇文章，表述支持理由以及反對(duì)理由，最后陳述自己對(duì)此的看法．成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全． （2）人稱使用要恰當(dāng)．（3）時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．（4）適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢．（5）恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次．根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn)，列出提綱：第一部分：寫作背景（很多人建議使用書信交流，引起了熱烈的討論）；第二部分：支持理由（結(jié)合圖表）+反對(duì)理由（結(jié)合圖表）；第三部分：我的觀點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
1．使用高級(jí)句型：虛擬語(yǔ)氣和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用Many people suggest that we should communicate by writing letters，which has caused a heated discussion among students in our school．；非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用students can practise their handwriting well，which is very beneficial to their future development．；含有同位語(yǔ)從句和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句 For another，they hold the view that handwritten letters are out of date，which should be given up．；使用含有非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句What's more，letters are easy to store，which will become great treasures for us to value when we memorize our past in the future．．2．使用了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)：on the other hand，however，for one thing，for another等．3．使用了重要短語(yǔ)：in favor of贊成；communicating with與…交流；hold on to堅(jiān)持；What's more而且．

解答 With the program Readers becoming popular recently，two handwritten letters read in it drew the audience's attention．Many people suggest that we should communicate by writing letters，which has caused a heated discussion among students in our school．（高分句型一）Students'opinions vary．
      70% of the students are in favor of it．On one hand，handwritten letters can help students express their feelings better while communicating with others．On the other hand，by writing letters，students can practise their handwriting well，which is very beneficial to their future development．（高分句型二）
       However，30% of the students are against it．For one thing，it's a waste of time and paper for students to write letters．For another，they hold the view that handwritten letters are out of date，which should be given up．（高分句型三）
       On my personal note，it is a good tradition that we need to hold on to．What's more，letters are easy to store，which will become great treasures for us to value when we memorize our past in the future．（高分句型四）（151 words）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．