Question

假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Helen正在寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于各國(guó)中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報(bào)告。她給你發(fā)了一封郵件，想了解相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給她回一封電子郵件：
你校學(xué)生課外閱讀的現(xiàn)狀；
原因分析；
你的看法。
注意：
根據(jù)所給提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求內(nèi)容充實(shí)，語(yǔ)意連貫；
詞數(shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
郵件中不得提及考生所在的學(xué)校和本人姓名。
參考詞匯：
課外閱讀extra-curricular reading
Dear Helen’
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. I’m sorry to say that most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.
I think the reasons behind that are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.
Best wishes!
Yours
Lihua

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作。半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。這篇作文是關(guān)于中學(xué)生課外閱讀情況的調(diào)查報(bào)告。考生可以從本校學(xué)生的閱讀情況入手，每天閱讀時(shí)間為多少，一個(gè)月要讀多少本書(shū)等等。分析原因可以從學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間太長(zhǎng)，留給閱讀的時(shí)間不夠等。在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子： as a result因此, prefer to do… rather than do…寧愿做…而不愿…，be burdened with負(fù)擔(dān)， form a habit of 形成…，the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和so that句型還有范文使用了Besides, First of all, However,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。