Question

假設(shè)你是李響，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“健康成長(zhǎng)”的英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)按要求寫(xiě)一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：
樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度；
參加體育鍛煉；
健康的飲食習(xí)慣。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
3. 開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。
We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                     
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       

Answer 1

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a positive attitude towards life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave when faced with difficulties.
Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can contribute to building our country and at the same time enjoy a better life.
Maintaining a healthy body is fundamental to leading a fulfilling, successful life. The secret to a healthy body is regular exercise and a balanced diet combined.

試題分析：此作文題目是一篇材料作文，要求寫(xiě)出三個(gè)方面的問(wèn)題，青少年要健康成長(zhǎng)一要有樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度，二要積極參加體育鍛煉，三還要有健康的飲食習(xí)慣，所以考生在審題時(shí)要主要內(nèi)容的全面性，同時(shí)可以適當(dāng)?shù)募尤脒B詞，使文章渾然一體，例如firstly, first of all,besides,what’s more and so on.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章有兩個(gè)方面的亮點(diǎn)我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)，一是文章的連貫性很強(qiáng)，渾然天成，這充分的體現(xiàn)在一些連貫詞的使用上，例如firstly,secondly 等，第二方面是文章巧妙的使用了一些固定結(jié)構(gòu)例如not only---but also---；名言例如knowledge is power;以及固定短語(yǔ)的使用consist of,contribute to—等。
考點(diǎn): 考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言的綜合運(yùn)用能力