Whether you want to improve your writing skills as a creative writer or simply perfect your skills for schoolwork, you can take some steps to learn how to be a better writer.

1. Use active instead of passive voice.

In English, the most basic sentence structure is S-V-O: Subject-Verb-Object. The passive voice usually requires more words and use of a “to be” verb form, which can suck the energy out of your writing. Learn to avoid these constructions as much as you can. 1. It conventionally uses the passive voice to put the emphasis on the results, rather than the researchers.

2. 2.

Finding the right verb or adjective can turn an uninspired sentence into one people will remember and quote for years to come. Look for words that are as specific as possible. Strong doesn't mean obscure, or more complicated. Don't say "utilize" when you could say "use." 3.

3. Cut the chaff.

4. You don't get points for saying in 50 words what could be said in 20, or for using multi-syllable words when a short one does just as well. It might feel good at first to pack a lot of ideas and details into a single sentence, but chances are that sentence is just going to be hard to read. If a phrase doesn't add anything valuable, just cut it. 5. If you notice that your writing is filled with "-ly" words, it might be time to take a deep breath and give your writing more focus.

A. Use strong words.

B. Show, don't tell.

C. Good writing is simple, clear and direct.

D. The main exception to this is science writing.

E. Cutting the chaff is best done at the editing stage.

F. "He sprinted" is not necessarily better than "he ran."

G. Don't write "screamed fearfully" -- "scream" already suggests fear.

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科目：高中英語 來源：江西省百校聯(lián)盟2017屆高三2月聯(lián)考英語試卷（有答案） 題型：七選五

Secrets to a great life

A great life doesn’t happen by accident. A great life is the result of allocating your time, energy, thoughts, and hard work towards what you want your life to be. 1.

A great life is the result of simplifying your life. People often misunderstand what simplify means. 2.When you focus on simplifying your life, you free up energy and time for the work that you enjoy and the purpose for which you are here. In order to create a great life, you will have to make room for it in yours first.

A great life is the result of your best effort. 3. It may mean re-evaluating how you spend your time, or choosing to spend your money in a different way. It may mean looking for new ways to spend your energy that coincide with your particular definition of a great life.

4.It's easy to spend your days just responding to the next thing that gets your attention, instead of intentionally using the time, energy and money you have in a way that's important to you. Focus on removing the obstacles that get in the way of you making sure you are doing things of greater significance.

A great life is the result of starting. There’s the old saying everyone’s familiar with “A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.” In order to even move from the couch to the refrigerator, you have to start. There’s no better time to start than today.5.Today, right now, is the right day to start to take a step in the direction of your heart’s desires.

A. Look around at someone’s life you admire.

B. It’s not a way to remove work from your life

C. A great life is the result of doing important things

D. Don’t wait for a raise, or until the kids get older.

E. A great life is the result of controlling your thoughts.

F. Use these “secrets” to start creating your own great life today!

G. Creating a great life requires that you make some adjustments.

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科目：高中英語 來源：四川省2016-2017學(xué)年高二下學(xué)期期中考試英語試卷 題型：短文填空

As my father had been offered a job in London, our family moved there. 1.(lose) all my old friends, I felt shy and lonely at my new school. Luckily for me, I met Roy 2. was a popular boy, helping me to get to know people. Roy and I became good friends and we 3. (trust) each other. However, five years later, Roy’s father was knocked 4. by a car and it was his father’s death that changed him 5. (complete). He became silent and moody, losing interest in his work. Worse still, 3 months ago, I found Roy 6. (go) through the pockets of people’s coats. And then, small 7. (amount) of money started to disappear from students’ lockers. Last week, the 500 pounds 8. (raise) for a charity was stolen. I wondered 9. the thief was Roy so I decided to ask him about the theft. To my surprise, I found a lot of paper notes in Roy’s jacket. Should I keep 10.a secret or tell the truth?

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科目：高中英語 來源：廣東省汕頭市2017屆高三上學(xué)期期末考試英語試卷 題型：短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My high school life has made me learn many things. Between them teamwork is the most significantly for me. In fact, I didn’t realize its importance after I was elected monitor. In the begin, I did almost all the duties myself. However, others students cared little about class activities. Therefore, I worn out and depressed. Then I turned to my head teacher but he advised me to cooperate with others. Gradually, I realized the strengths of my classmates and managed to have everyone to play a part in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own which has freed me from trouble and make my work more efficient.

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科目：高中英語 來源：廣東省汕頭市2017屆高三上學(xué)期期末考試英語試卷 題型：閱讀理解

The editor of the new Cool Camping Britain guide chooses some of his favorite new finds in England, Wales and Scotland.

Cleadale, Isle of Eigg, Inner Hebrides

Is this Britain’s most beautiful campsite? From the grassy point looking seaward to the mountains, it’s not hard for campers to see how the island inspired The Lord of the Rings author’s fantasy landscapes. The campsite itself is as wild and wonderful as its setting.

Open April - September, from ￡5 per tent per night.

Swattesfield, Thornham Magna, Suffolk

Deep in the wilds of north Suffolk, this seven-acre campsite has only been open for a few years, with two fields separated by a lake and surrounded by woodland. The position is perfect. It’s a great place to do nothing but get into nature. You can put up your tent in the bottom field or the woodland beyond.

Open Easter - October, from ￡10 per tent per night.

Pleasant Streams Farm, near St Austell, Cornwall

This site, by a lake, is all about simple pleasures. Located in the former mining village, it has a summerhouse(涼亭) with books and games for a rainy day. There are many animals including pigs, hens, goats and ducks on the farm and a pub just a 10- minute stroll away. There’s very little to do here, no bells and no whistles. Campfires are encouraged.

Open Easter - September, from ￡10 per tent per night.

Troytown Campsite, St Agnes, Isles of Sciily

Its only campsite, Troytown, couldn’t be in a more remote position. Isolation is its greatest advantage — so bring plenty of books to read and don’t expect a phone signal. But at least one of life’s necessities is available. Lying on the hillside overlooking the bay and near the island of the Gugh, it might just win the prize for best beer garden view in England.

Open March - October, from ￡7. 50 per tent per night,

1.Which of the following is TRUE about Cleadale, Isle of Eigg, Inner Hebrides?

A. It has been open for a few years.

B. A beautiful lake surrounds it.

C. It offers the longest service.

D. The rent of a tent per night is the lowest.

2.Which place can you choose if you like a simple farm life?

A. Cleadale, Isle of Eigg, Inner Hebrides.

B. Swattesfield, Thornham Magna, Suffolk.

C. Pleasant Streams Farm, near St Austell, Cornwall.

D. Troytown Campsite, St Agnes, Isles of Scilly.

3.In Troytown Campsite, St Agnes, Isles of Scilly, you can’t ________.

A. contact others by phones B. view the bay from the hillside

C. get everyday necessities D. relax yourself by reading

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科目：高中英語 來源：四川省外國語實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校2016-2017學(xué)年高二下學(xué)期第二學(xué)段英語試卷 題型：書面表達(dá)

假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Johnson即將到你所在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，想通過你了解學(xué)校食堂(canteen)的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示給他寫封電子郵件，向他介紹相關(guān)情況。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 就餐時(shí)間

2. 菜品種類

3. 就餐費(fèi)用。

注意：1. 100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Johnson,

I am glad to hear that you will come to study in our school.

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Looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

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The office has always been a place to get ahead. Unfortunately, It is also a place where a lot of natural resources start to fall behind. Take a look around next time you’re at work. See how many lights are left on when people leave. See how much paper is being wasted. How much electricity is being used to run computers that are left on. Look at how much water is being wasted in the rest-rooms. And how much solid waste is being thrown out in the rubbish cans. We bet it’s a lot.

Now, here are some simple ways you can produce less waste at work. When you are at the copier, only make the copies you need. Use both sides of the paper when writing something less important. Turn off your lights when you leave. Use a lower watt bulb in your lamp. Drink your coffee or tea out of your mugs instead of single-use cups. Set up a recycling box for cans and one for bottles. And when you’re in the bathroom brushing your teeth or washing your face, don’t let the tap run. Remember, if we use fewer resources today, we’ll save more for tomorrow.

1.The main purpose of the passage is to tell people _______.

A. the disadvantages of working in an office

B. the waste produced in an office

C. to save resources when working in an office

D. how to save water in a restroom

2.From the passage we can infer that in the office ________.

A. using computers is a waste of resource

B. many people don’t turn off the computers after using them

C. computers are to make electricity

D. a computer is not a must for working

3.It is suggested that we use both sides of the paper at the copier because _______.

A. we are short of paper B. the printing is not important

C. we should save paper D. we have to pay for the paper

4.The underlined word mugs is most likely to be _______.

A. a machine that makes coffee

B. a container that can be used again and again

C. a paper product for tea

D. something that can only be found in an office

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New York City Tour Guide

CENTRAL PARK PHOTO TOUR $79

With Sam L.

Come to shoot in the Central Park of New York that will allow you to take home digital postcards.This tour is a great introduction to Central Park and combines views of the bridges,lakes and skyline.

At each stop of the photo tour,I will provide you with explanations around photography（攝影）,camera settings, etc.You will be able to put these tips to good use immediately.

NEW YORK RUNMNG TOUR $50

With Sebastien B.

Love running?Love New York?Do you want to see the sites of the city?Contact me and we'll take a special tour. All you'll need to do is to put on your sports shoes and we'll be off.I'll show you my favorite running spots along the Hudson River or north of Central Park and away from all the tourists.

If you're thinking of training for something,I’ll give you the explanations and tips to make the best of your time training!

GREENWICH VILLAGE FOOD TOUR $75

With Manhattan W.

Discover unbelievable places to eat.This is the real Greenwich Village gastronomic（美食的）experience.Along the way,find out how the village has kept its unique character throughout the years,from the Dutch and English controlled periods to today.

Tour runs every day from 12:30 PM-2:30 PM.

NEW YORK BY NIGHT PHOTO TOUR $115

With Sam L.

We have already prepared NYC for the most unique points for you.During the-hour walking tour,we share these special comers of NYC.

The night tour teaches night photography techniques while discovering the "darker" side of the city that never sleeps: the UN headquarters,42nd street,Grand Central Terminal,the Chrysler Building,Rockefeller Center and Radio City Music Hall.

1.Who will you contact if you want to take pictures of the Central Park?

A. Sam L. B. Sebastien B.

C. Manhattan W. D. Rockefeller.

2.How much can you spend running along the Hudson River with Sebastien B?

A. $79. B. $50.

C. $75. D. $115.

3.What can you do if you choose Manhattan W as your tour guide?

A. You can shoot some pictures.

B. You can do some sports.

C. You can enjoy some delicious food.

D. You can learn night photography techniques.

4.In which part of a magazine can you read this kind of passage?

A. Advertisement. B. History.

C. Science. D. Politics.

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科目：高中英語 來源：黑龍江省2016-2017學(xué)年高一6月月考英語試卷 題型：七選五

Dos and Don’ts for USA Travel

Despite what difficult procedures (程序) you may have endured to get to the U.S., including visa troubles, airport security screenings, and the like, the United States is a rather relaxing place once you arrive. 1. Following are basic tips about traveling in the USA.

Don’t try to see and do too much.

2. Many foreign visitors to the United States try to see New York, Washington DC, Miami, and Los Angeles all in one trip. That kind of touring can leave a traveler very tired if you have limited vacation days. The best way is to focus on a region and more deeply.

3.

While traveling in the United States, do be sure to smile, ask questions, say “please” and “thank you”, and be patient. In almost all cases, your kindness will be rewarded by locals who want to show you the best of their cities and towns.

Do obey traffic signs and laws.

Traveling outside of the United States, I have noticed that stop lights and “No Parking” signs in some parts of the world are only suggestions for drivers. Not in America. Drivers must come to a full stop at a red light and remain stopped until the light turns green. 4.

Do be on time.

America take punctuality very seriously. 5. Give yourself more time than you think you’ll need to get to some place, especially if you’re not familiar with the area as unexpected delays can happen, such as heavy traffic.

A. It is considered rude to be late.

B. Besides, drivers should obey the speed limit.

C. Do be kind, smile, and enjoy yourself.

D. Don’t assume you can smoke anywhere.

E. The United States is larger than Europe.

F. Try to use the vocabulary they use in their everyday life.

G. But we do have a few rules that foreign visitors may not know about.

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