9．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文．短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
At about 9o'clock last night，I was doing my homework while suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laugh loudly．He was watching football game on TV．I couldn't go on studying and became impatiently．I covered my ears，trying to keep the noise out，and in vain．So I had to go to my neighbor's．
I knocked at her door and said，"Good evening，Mr，Yang!Could you please turn up your TV a bit？I was doing my homework．""Oh，I'm really sorry to have being disturbed you，I'll do as you say，"My neighbor said politely．"Thank you very much，"I said and went back to continue my works．

分析 短文敘述了昨天晚上在我做作業(yè)的時候，我的鄰居在看足球比賽影響了我，最后向我道歉．

解答 At about 9o'clock last night，I was doing my homework while suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laugh loudly．He was watching∧football game on TV．I couldn't go on studying and became impatiently．I covered my ears，trying to keep the noise out，and in vain．So I had to go to my neighbor's．
I knocked at her door and said，"Good evening，Mr，Yang!Could you please turn up your TV a bit？I was doing my homework．""Oh，I'm really sorry to have being disturbed you，I'll do as you say，"My neighbor said politely．"Thank you very much，"I said and went back to continue my works．
1．while改為when 考查連接詞．此處when表示就在那時．
2．laugh改為laughing 考查分詞．根據(jù)句式可知，shouting和laughing并列作為heard賓語補足語．
3．在football前加a  考查冠詞．觀看一場足球賽，a football match．
4．impatiently改為impatient 考查形容詞，become是系動詞，后需用形容詞做表語．
5．a(chǎn)nd改為but 考查連接詞．根據(jù)句意可知，此處是表示轉(zhuǎn)折，故使用but．
6．her改為his 考查物主代詞．前文提到我的鄰居是為男性，所以用his．
7．up改為down 考查介詞．此處是固定短語turn down意思是將聲音調(diào)�。�
8．was改為am 考查動詞時態(tài)．敘述的當時發(fā)生的事情，故使用現(xiàn)在時．
9．去掉being 非謂語．此處是動詞不定式完成時態(tài)，to have disturbed表示已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情．
10．works改為work 考查名詞．work此時是不可數(shù)名詞，表示工作．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹R點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．

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