Question

近幾年來，隨著中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，節(jié)假日出國的人越來越多，但是出國游中存在許多不文明行為。請你根據(jù)以下提示以“To Be a Good Tourist”為題寫一篇120字左右的短文。

1.不良行為有：亂扔垃圾，大聲喧嘩，不排隊等 。

2.文明做法是：友好安靜懂禮貌，遵循當(dāng)?shù)仫L(fēng)俗和法規(guī)，保護(hù)生態(tài)環(huán)境等。

3. 你的看法。

In recent years with the rapid development of China’s economy,

Answer 1

In recent years, with the rapid development of China’s economy, more and more Chinese people travel to foreign countries during their holidays and festivals. But there’re many bad behaviors among them.

Some people throw rubbish everywhere. They often make loud noises in public places. Besides, some people jump the queue while others are waiting. All these behaviors seriously affect the image of Chinese people. What should we do? Firstly, we should be friendly and keep quiet in public places. Secondly, following the local customs and obeying their laws are also necessary. Also, it’s very important to protect the natural environment when travelling.

In my opinion, it’s time for us to get rid of our bad habits to be good tourists. Only in this way can we be respected by foreign people when we are in foreign countries. (132 words)

【解析】

試題分析：近幾年來，隨著中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，節(jié)假日出國的人越來越多，但是出國游中存在許多不文明行為。請你根據(jù)以下提示以“To Be a Good Tourist”為題寫一篇120字左右的短文。1.不良行為有：亂扔垃圾，大聲喧嘩，不排隊等 。2.文明做法是：友好安靜懂禮貌，遵循當(dāng)?shù)仫L(fēng)俗和法規(guī)，保護(hù)生態(tài)環(huán)境等。3. 你的看法。要把所提示的點寫全，把漢語翻譯成通順的英語句子，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩，注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)在120詞左右，不要太多或太少。特別注意最后要有你的看法，這樣才能體現(xiàn)出文章的完整。

【亮點說明】Besides, some people jump the queue while others are waiting.此句運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)的并列句；What should we do?這是一個問句，使文章上下句銜接的非常好；we should be friendly and keep quiet in public places.句中使用了并列謂語，嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)轿唬籄lso, it’s very important to protect the natural environment when travelling.在此句中it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式短語，并在句中使用了省略的時間狀語從句，即when加現(xiàn)在分詞的結(jié)構(gòu)，更顯的文中的句型豐富多彩；it’s time for us to get rid of our bad habits to be good tourists. It作形式主語，動詞不定式復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)做句子的真正主語；Only in this way can we be respected by foreign people when we are in foreign countries.這是一個部分倒裝的句子，作為文章的壓軸句子，更為文章錦上添花。另外，But/Besides/Firstly /Secondly /Also/ In my opinion的運(yùn)用，使句子銜接自然，層次分明，讓人回味無窮。

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