Question

隨著留學(xué)熱潮的不斷升溫，“微留學(xué)”也迅速進(jìn)入學(xué)生的視野。“微留學(xué)”是指學(xué)生通過利用假期時(shí)間組團(tuán)去國(guó)外名校進(jìn)行短期游歷和學(xué)習(xí)，對(duì)留學(xué)生活有個(gè)初步體驗(yàn)。為此，你們班舉行了一次以“中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該進(jìn)行微留學(xué)”為主題的討論班會(huì)。下表是討論結(jié)果，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇文章同時(shí)談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />參考詞匯：微留學(xué)：short-term overseas study tours或micro study tours; 虛榮心：vanity

贊成：60%	反對(duì)：40%
感受國(guó)外名校氛圍； 提前體驗(yàn)留學(xué)生活。	費(fèi)用太高，多數(shù)家庭無力承擔(dān)； 有些學(xué)生“留學(xué)”是隨潮流，滿足虛榮心。
你的看法……

注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100-120左右；

Answer 1

Recently we have had a discussion about whether middle school students should go abroad for short-term overseas study tours. Opinions are divided as follows.
About 60% of us think it wise to go on short-term overseas study tours, through which we can get closer to some famous schools and have a better knowledge of them. Meanwhile, we can also experience the life of studying abroad ahead of schedule.
However, the rest hold different views. In their opinion, the fees are too high for most families to afford. Besides, middle school students, who spend most of their time at school, should spare some time with their parents. Worse still, some students do so only to satisfy their vanity.
As far as I’m concerned, short-term overseas study tours may be a motivation for me to study harder. For one thing, it can help me broaden my horizons and have a better understanding of foreign culture. For another, it can also serve as a test showing whether a student is able to live an independent life abroad or not.

試題分析：
本文是一篇觀點(diǎn)綜述。因?yàn)閷戇@篇綜述時(shí)，人們的觀點(diǎn)并未發(fā)生改變。所以全文應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。談?wù)撟约旱目捶〞r(shí)，應(yīng)該注意不要重復(fù)前文雙方觀點(diǎn)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。首先簡(jiǎn)要介紹討論的話題、范圍和時(shí)間，然后綜述雙方觀點(diǎn)，最后闡明自己看法。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】層次清楚分明。要點(diǎn)齊全。過渡自然。使用了定語從句：through which we can get closer to some famous schools and have a better knowledge of them. who spend most of their time at school,插入語：Meanwhile, However, Besides, As far as I’m concerned, For one thing, For another。等