Question

【題目】假如你是新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華， 你在某網(wǎng)站上看到美國網(wǎng)友John的帖子(post), 帖子上 說John 對(duì)中國的 文化感興趣， 想結(jié)識(shí)一位中國的高中生朋友， 幫助他了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日， 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示給他回信。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.你的簡(jiǎn)介；

2.中國節(jié)日（春節(jié)） 簡(jiǎn)介;

3.邀請(qǐng)來中國。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右 （開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

3.開頭語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet. ___________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet. Having learned that you are interested in Chinese culture, I would like to be your friend and introduce it to you.

I’m a Senior 3 student from Xin Hua High School . I am good at history and English. I believe that we can get along well with each other and become good friends.

There are a lot of traditional festivals in China, of which the Spring Festival is considered to be the most important. All the families get together to celebrate the Lunar New Year. People eat dumplings, fish and meat as well as other delicious food. Children can get lucky money in red paper. People have a good time, holding opera performances, and other celebrations.

I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華， 你在某網(wǎng)站上看到美國網(wǎng)友John的帖子(post), 帖子上 說John 對(duì)中國的 文化感興趣， 想結(jié)識(shí)一位中國的高中生朋友， 幫助他了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日， 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示給他回信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.你的簡(jiǎn)介；2.中國節(jié)日（春節(jié)） 簡(jiǎn)介;3.邀請(qǐng)來中國。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右 （開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Having learned that you are interested in Chinese culture, I would like to be your friend and introduce it to you. 現(xiàn)在分詞完成時(shí)做原因狀語；I believe that we can get along well with each other and become good friends. 句中運(yùn)用賓語從句；There are a lot of traditional festivals in China, of which the Spring Festival is considered to be the most important.非限制性定語從句用在句中；People have a good time, holding opera performances, and other celebrations.現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)；另外，文章語言流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。