Question

假設你是李華。你的英國筆友John寫信告訴你近日他由于沉迷于電腦游戲，健康受到很大影響。他十分焦慮。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，給他寫一封回信，建議他養(yǎng)成良好的生活習慣。
要點如下：
1．限制玩游戲的時間，把精力逐漸轉(zhuǎn)移到其他事情上；
2．規(guī)定起床和睡覺的時間，形成良好的作息習慣；
3．每天鍛煉半小時，增強體質(zhì)。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；   2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear John，
I’m sorry to hear that you’re addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health.
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Yours faithfully,
Xiao Hua

Answer 1

Dear John,  
I’m sorry to hear that you’ve addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health. I know you worry about it very much. As a good friend, I’m willing to give you some advice. Firstly, you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games and pay more attention to other things. Secondly, you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly. Thirdly, you should do exercise for about half an hour every day to strengthen your body. I do hope you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

解析根據(jù)要點寫一封回信，首先要明確要點所涉及的信息及關系，其次注意恰當?shù)氖褂藐P聯(lián)詞，例如，firstly, secondly, thirdly或是比較復雜的，像是to begin with, then, finally.再次，句式的選擇。借助從句的應用，讓閱卷人感覺應試者有較為深厚的語法功底和極好的語言表現(xiàn)力。
考查點：提綱作文
【亮點說明】
如要點中“限制玩游戲的時間”可以處理成you should limit the time that you spend playing computer games，“規(guī)定起床和睡覺的時間，形成良好的作息習慣；”可以處理成 you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can form a habit of getting up and going to bed regularly.以上均是借助從句的應用，顯示出作者扎實的寫作功底。