Question

進(jìn)入高三以后，大部分同學(xué)覺得時(shí)間緊了，學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重了，所以有些同學(xué)課間十分鐘休息時(shí)間也在看書做題，請(qǐng)你以 A Ten-minute Break為題，用英語寫一篇短文，描寫這一現(xiàn)象并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê妥龇ā?/p>

注意：1、詞數(shù)120左右；

2、短文中不能出現(xiàn)本人相關(guān)信息。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible vision:

As a senior three student, time seems very limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

During the ten-minute break we had better do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring is really good for us.

My ten-minute break is always wonderful. Sometimes I take some simple exercise. Sometimes I have a small talk with my classmates or just take a walk outside. Besides I like looking at green trees out of the window, doing nothing. This will help to relax myself. When the next class begins I feel refreshed again.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性作文。話題是課間十分鐘。有些學(xué)生把這十分鐘用來學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)發(fā)表對(duì)這樣問題的看法。首先考生需要描述這一現(xiàn)象，其次要分析該現(xiàn)象出現(xiàn)的原因：學(xué)生的壓力太大，渴望利用一切可以利用的時(shí)間來進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)。各科作業(yè)太多，逼迫學(xué)生不得不爭(zhēng)分奪秒，不放松任何一點(diǎn)時(shí)間。分析這樣做的結(jié)果：影響學(xué)生的上課的學(xué)習(xí)效率，反而得不償失。

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點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于半開放性作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。