假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增添、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（︿），并在其下面寫出改加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。
Our mothers accompanied us to school in the first day. Soon a teacher came and led us to a classroom. There we were put into four separate class. Some children begin to cry as the parents were not allowing into the classroom. I did not cry because I have been to kindergarten before. Actual my mother went home soon after for she knew I would be all right. It was enjoyable time for me as I got to know my new classmates. The teacher was very busy for writing down our information so they had plenty of time to ourselves. In the meantime some children continued to sob although their parents looked in anxiously through the window.


【小題1】 in-on
【小題2】class—classes
【小題3】begin—began
【小題4】allowing –allowed
【小題5】 have-had
【小題6】Actual—Actually
【小題7】was 后加an 
【小題8】去掉for或for改為in
【小題9】they—we
【小題10】although—while/when/as

解析試題分析：文章介紹了作者第一天上幼兒園的場(chǎng)景。
【小題1】 我們的媽媽在第一天陪我們?nèi)W(xué)校。在第一天，用介詞on
【小題2】我們被分到四個(gè)不同的班級(jí)。Four后面接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)：class—classes
【小題3】一些孩子開始哭了，因?yàn)楦改覆辉试S進(jìn)入教室。這篇文章用的是一般過去式：begin—began
【小題4】parents和allow是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用allowed
【小題5】我沒有哭，因?yàn)槲乙郧吧线^幼兒園的。這里是過去的過去的動(dòng)作，用過去完成時(shí)： have-had
【小題6】實(shí)際上，我媽媽很快回家了，因?yàn)樗牢液芎茫盒揎椪麄�(gè)句子，用副詞：Actual—Actually
【小題7】這是一段愉快的時(shí)光。表示“一段時(shí)光”，was 后加an 
【小題8】老師在忙于寫下我們的信息。Be busy（in） doing忙于做…，去掉for或for改為in
【小題9】所以我們有很多自己的時(shí)間。和ourselves對(duì)應(yīng)用we
【小題10】同時(shí)，當(dāng)父母通過窗戶焦急的看著的時(shí)候，一些孩子繼續(xù)在哭。連詞錯(cuò)誤：although—while/when/as
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