Question

最近你市發(fā)現(xiàn)了一處唐文化遺址。是否應(yīng)當(dāng)被開發(fā)？人們展開了激烈的討論。贊成開發(fā)的人認(rèn)為：應(yīng)開發(fā)利用以吸引更多的游客來旅游觀光; 更好了解歷史; 增加旅游收入。 反對開發(fā)的人認(rèn)為：應(yīng)保持原樣，妥善保護(hù)，以免遭人為破壞。
假如你是一名記者，請以Should the cultural relic be explored?為題目,寫一篇 100 字左右的報道，并發(fā)表自己的看法,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
提示: cultural relic 文化遺址;  explore開發(fā)

Answer 1

Recently, citizens in our city have had \ held a heated a debate on whether we should explore the cultural relics, which was discovered in our city. Different people have different opinions.
Some people are in favor of the idea. They think the cultural relic is worth exploring, which will make people learn more about the great history. What’s more, this cultural relic site can attract more visitors to our city, which will improve our tourism.
However, others hold an opposite opinion, thinking that we should keep it as it is and protect it properly. Only in this way can it not be destroyed by people.
As far as I am concerned, we should ask the experts for advice to find a better way to make good use of this cultural relic.

試題分析：本文屬于議論文，議論的話題是關(guān)于唐文化遺址的開發(fā)的問題，有人支持，有人反對。文章的要點(diǎn)給的比較全，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評：本文題型是考生分詞熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，在平時的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當(dāng)使用一至兩句諺語如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。