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4．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給你的外教Mr．Black寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加你們學(xué)校舉行的英語(yǔ)讀書會(huì)（reading circle）活動(dòng)，郵件的內(nèi)容包括：
1．介紹讀書活動(dòng)的相關(guān)信息（例如：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；
2．說(shuō)明你發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)的原因；
3．詢問(wèn)對(duì)方的意向．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100詞；
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Black，
I hope that everything goes on well with you．I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）We'll feel honored if you are present．
The activity is scheduled at 8：00 am this Friday in the auditorium．Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）
As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）
Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us？Thank you in advance．Hope to hear from you soon．
Your，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給你的外教Mr．Black寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加你們學(xué)校舉行的英語(yǔ)讀書會(huì)（reading circle）活動(dòng)，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：介紹讀書活動(dòng)的相關(guān)信息（例如：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；說(shuō)明你發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)的原因；詢問(wèn)對(duì)方的意向．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Aim to目的是；communicate with溝通，交流；face to face面對(duì)面；spare some time抽出時(shí)間；
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）
Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）
As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
       I hope that everything goes on well with you．I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）We'll feel honored if you are present．
      The activity is scheduled at 8：00 am this Friday in the auditorium．Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）
      Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us？Thank you in advance．Hope to hear from you soon．
                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．