Question

假如你是你校英語內(nèi)刊的編輯李華，你校的一位同學(xué)Mary最近在網(wǎng)上結(jié)識的一位網(wǎng)友約她見面，她不知道該不該去，因此寫信向你咨詢。請你用英文給她寫一封建議信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1. 最好不要去見任何網(wǎng)友；

2. 如果確實(shí)想見，要保證自身安全（選擇人多的公眾場合；不要透露過多的個人信息）。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mary,

I’m happy that you have made friends with someone online.________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

I’m happy that you have made friends with someone online. It’s really nice to have a friend to share your happiness and sorrow.But I want to remind you that it can be dangerous to make friends online because you don’t know who the one you are chatting with is. She said she was a girl, but maybe the person is a bad man. So I don’t think it’s a goos idea to see the friend in person.

However, if you insist on meeting him or her, I suggest you choose pubic places, such as KFC, as your meeting place, where there are numerous people. Besides, you shouldn’t let out too much of your personal information.

Hope the suggestions above can be of some help.

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求向瑪麗寫一封建議信。關(guān)于要不要去見網(wǎng)友的事情，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象for instance, Furthermore,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

It’s really nice to have a friend to share your happiness and sorrow.這是it組形式主語的用法，But I want to remind you that it can be dangerous to make friends online because you don’t know who the one you are chatting with is. 這句話里面有who引導(dǎo)的賓語從句， So I don’t think it’s a goos idea to see the friend in person.這句話用了否定前移， I suggest you choose pubic places, such as KFC, as your meeting place, where there are numerous people.這句話用了定語從句，還有 Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞也要多用。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類作文