Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給學校英語報投稿，介紹你們上個月開展的一次班級活動。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于60；

2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Last month, we went to the exhibition displaying China’s outstanding achievements over the past five years.

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Answer 1

【答案】Last month, we went to the exhibition displaying China’s outstanding achievements over the past five years. As soon as we arrived, a guide gave us an introduction to the exhibition. While listening, we made some notes carefully. We fell excited and couldn’t wait to start the visit. Later, we looked around in the exhibition hall. We were all inspired by the various exhibits, including the models of the high-speed train. We took a lot of photos and were proud of the achievements of our country.

The next day, we had a discussion at school about how to present what we had seen. We finally decided on a class meeting. Immediately we devoted ourselves to preparing the presentations.

At the class meeting, we delivered speeches in turn, sharing the most impressive parts of the exhibition and expressing the confidence in the future of our country.

Both the exhibition and the class meeting are memorable experiences, which will encourage us forever.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇看圖作文。根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給學校英語報投稿，介紹你們上個月開展的一次班級活動。認真閱讀四幅圖畫，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是看圖作文，文章能準確、恰當?shù)伢w現(xiàn)出圖畫中的內(nèi)容，語言流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，并在句中使用高級句子。As soon as we arrived, a guide gave us an introduction to the exhibition.as soon as引導時間狀語從句；While listening, we made some notes carefully.現(xiàn)在分詞做時間狀語；we had a discussion at school about how to present what we had seen.what引導賓語從句；we delivered speeches in turn, sharing the most impressive parts of the exhibition and expressing the confidence in the future of our country.現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)；, which will encourage us forever. which引導非限制性定語從句。