Question

假如你是高一學(xué)生王剛，在放寒假之前你想寫(xiě)一封信給你的英文老師Mrs. Chen。
信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：
1） Mrs. Chen的課堂生動(dòng)有趣，自己進(jìn)步很大；
2）自己在學(xué)習(xí)中的困難；
3）給老師的教學(xué)建議(至少兩條)；
注意：1）不要逐條翻譯;
2）字?jǐn)?shù)為120左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3）不得使用真實(shí)姓名。
Dear Mrs. Chen,
How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Wang Gang

Answer 1

Dear Mrs. Chen,
How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.
To begin with, I want to say thanks to you for your hard work . Besides, we all enjoy your lively and interesting class. And with your help, we have made such great progress in English.
To be honest, I still have some puzzles. I can’t keep so many new words in mind and don’t know how to use them correctly. What’s more, grammar is a big problem to me. I often mix up its rules. Would you please help me with these problems?
Mrs. Chen, as we hope to improve our listening ability, could you please speak more English in Class? And we can’t bear so much homework of all the subjects, so would you please reduce the amount of English homework?
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Wang Gang

解析試題分析：本文是一篇書(shū)信體裁的書(shū)面表達(dá)，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，所以不用注意格式，只要把內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出來(lái)即可，但因?yàn)槭墙o老師寫(xiě)信，說(shuō)話的語(yǔ)氣和措辭要禮貌，盡量用上一些高級(jí)的句型和詞匯，比如表示感激的I will be appreciate it if you can …..; I would be grateful if you …..; thank you for ….等，表示有困難短語(yǔ)：have difficulty with sth ；have trouble in doing sth等。因?yàn)樘崾疽�點(diǎn)包括三個(gè)方面，所以在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上，可以采用三段式。此外，在連詞成篇時(shí)，要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，以使語(yǔ)言通順流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用典型的三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，分別表達(dá)了對(duì)老師的感激，自己學(xué)習(xí)中的困難以及給老師的教學(xué)建議等，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。在文中作者使用了to begin with，besides ，to be honest ，what’s more 等插入語(yǔ)和副詞，使文章語(yǔ)言銜接自然流暢。在提出建議時(shí)使用了could you please speak more English in Class?和Would you please reduce the amount of English homework? 等提出請(qǐng)求，這樣使得語(yǔ)氣更加委婉，增強(qiáng)了建議的可接納性。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。