Question

請結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作。

According to some surveys, when students need to finish some tasks, they like to find the answers, only depending on the internet instead of their own creative thinking.

要求 （1）就此材料發(fā)表你的看法；

（2）緊扣材料，有明確的觀點(diǎn)；

（3）詞數(shù)不少于60；

（4）在答題卡上作答。

Answer 1

As can be seen in the material, nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need. Students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their own thinking. So measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求結(jié)合所給材料寫一篇英語短文。材料的意思是學(xué)生們喜歡從網(wǎng)上查找答案，而不是進(jìn)行獨(dú)立思考。寫作要求包括：發(fā)表自己的看法；緊扣材料并有明確的觀點(diǎn)。詞數(shù)不少于60詞；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗�并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了非限制性定語從句、主語從句、固定句型等語法知識，具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

語法方面：非限制性定語從句①As can be seen in the material，②which is not beneficial to their own thinking；定語從句they need；固定句型it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying；主語從句①it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves，②what teachers and parents should do等，語法知識運(yùn)用嫻熟，顯示了較強(qiáng)的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用nowadays, as a result, so, firstly, besides, finally等來銜接句子和段落，使表達(dá)變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了tend to do, make use of, take measures, of great significance等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：材料類作文