文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下面畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
It doesn’t matter to fail as long as you don’t give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That’s okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who’ve had the most failure. J.K. Rowling, who wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was cut his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that’s because I succeed.”


【小題1】To→In
【小題2】were→are
【小題3】necessary→ necessarily
【小題4】for the first time →去掉for
【小題5】one→ones
【小題6】failure→failures
【小題7】was rejected→去掉was
【小題8】cut∧ his high→from
【小題9】miss →missed
【小題10】because→why

解析試題分析:本文敘述了挑戰(zhàn)是在我們?nèi)松斜匾囊徊糠。還列舉了杰克·羅琳的第一本《哈利波特》被拒絕了12次才出版的故事;邁克爾喬丹被從他的高中籃球隊(duì)裁下來,錯失了很多進(jìn)球,終于成功了的故事。
【小題1】考查介詞。短語in my opinion “依我來看”。因此此處把介詞to改為介詞in。
【小題2】考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語從句as you grow up,可知此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時,故把were改為are。
【小題3】考查副詞。修飾動詞succeed,故此處用副詞 necessarily。
【小題4】考查短語。for the first time “首次,第一次”,獨(dú)立作狀語。  the first time“第一次”連詞,后接從句,不能獨(dú)立使用。因此處有從句 you try,故用連詞 the first time.因此去掉介詞for。
【小題5】考查代詞。根據(jù)the one代指的是Some of the most successful people一些成功的人,是復(fù)數(shù),故此處應(yīng)用ones。
【小題6】考查名詞。根據(jù)Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who’ve had the most failure. 世界上一些最成功的人是經(jīng)歷失敗最多的人。failure失敗,是不可數(shù)名詞;失敗的人或事,是可數(shù)名詞。由the most“最多”來修飾,表示失敗的事,因此此處用failures.
【小題7】考查動詞。Have sth.done 遭受。根據(jù)句意:她的第一部《哈利·波特》被拒絕了12次。因此此處去掉動詞was。
【小題8】考查介詞。根據(jù)句意:邁克爾喬丹被從他的高中籃球隊(duì)裁下來,因此此處應(yīng)加上介詞from. cut from 從......才下來。
【小題9】考查時態(tài)。 連詞 and 前后并列,前面的是動詞lost 是一般過去時,故此處也是一般過去時 ,因此把miss改為missed。
【小題10】考查名詞性從句。根據(jù)句意:這就是我為什么成功了。因此此處用代詞why.
考點(diǎn):短文改錯。

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