Question

短文改錯。
     下面文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
     增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。
     刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
     修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
     注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
                 2． 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。

     Whenever I hear the song "My desk mates", I can't help thinking of Tom, who is my desk mate for
 nearly two years. A disabled boy as he was, he always turned out the top student in every test. It was 
such great efforts that were made despite all the difficulty in the school year that contributed to his 
success. Meanwhile, what I want to emphasis is that, as a monitor, he was very responsible for his
 work. I still remember that our head teacher went to hospital because of a severely headache one day
 and left him in the charge of the whole class. To my surprise, he looked like a head teacher exactly, and
 made the class in perfect order! I really looked up to him. Now, although we are in different schools, we 
still keep touch with each other, discussing the problems in studies and share our happiness and sorrow. 
I'do hope he does well in his study and makes progress every day!
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Answer 1

Whenever I hear the song "My desk mates", I can't help thinking of Tom, who is my desk
                                                                                                                    1.was
mate for nearly two years. A disabled boy as he was, he always turned out the top student in every
                                      2. 去掉
test. It was such great efforts that were made despite all the difficulty in the school year that
                                           3. as                                     4.  difficulties
contributed to his success. Meanwhile, what I want to emphasis is that, as a monitor, he was very
                                          5. However                    6.  emphasize
responsible for his work. I still remember that our head teacher went to hospital because of a
severely headache one day and left him in the charge of the whole class. To my surprise, he looked
7. severe                                              8. 去掉
like a head teacher exactly, and made the class in perfect order! I really looked up to him. Now,
although we are in different schools, we still keep∧touch with each other, discussing the problems
                                                                       9  . in
in studies and share our happiness and sorrow. I do hope he does well in his study and makes
                  10. sharing
progress every day!