Question

假設你是李華，David是你的美國網(wǎng)友。他對目前中國出現(xiàn)的霧霆天氣很關(guān)注，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。
主要內(nèi)容如下：
1.感謝他的關(guān)注。
2.簡介霧霾 (smog) 天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害。
3.談談你的感想。
注意：可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢；
開頭與結(jié)尾已寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)；
詞數(shù)：120左右
Dear David，
I'm glad to receive your letter.
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.
As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.
Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas. 

試題分析：本文的寫作非常好些，對于環(huán)境保護的文章學生在平時的練習中經(jīng)常練，學生有話可寫。對于本文首先對他的關(guān)注表示感謝Thank you for your concern.進而介紹霧霾天氣對人健康的不好的影響，如交通堵塞，肺癌，交通事故等等such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.來表達。最后，表達自己的觀點和感想，我們應該盡力的少開車，選擇環(huán)保的產(chǎn)品，每個人都要意識到保護環(huán)境的重要性try to drive less and choose air-friendly products.
everyone should have the environmental awareness.
點評：書面表達是最能體現(xiàn)一個學生的語言運用能力和英語思維理解的題目，議論文的寫作一般采用經(jīng)典的二段或三段式進行行文，議論文是比較容易寫的文體，提高作文無外乎平時多練習，在練習過程中，對于寫錯或是不知道表達的一定要多問老師，同時還應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。