假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線＼劃掉。
修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計分
It was very fine when I got up on last Sunday morning. So I decided to go for a walk and took some photos in the beautiful country. After breakfast, I carried my camera with me and set off. Everything went smooth. I enjoyed my trip so much that I didn’t realize the weather had been turned bad. I began to run and it was too late. I was caught in the rain and was wet through. I kept on running until I get to a bus stop. I stood there waited a long time for the bus shivering(顫抖的) in cold. Shortly after I got home, I had high fever, it made me stay in bed for a whole week!


【小題1】去掉on
【小題2】took----take
【小題3】 smooth---smoothly
【小題4】去掉been
【小題5】and---but
【小題6】get---got
【小題7】high 前加a;
【小題8】it---which

解析試題分析：文章講述作者上星期天到鄉(xiāng)村散步拍照片，但是遇到大雨，回來后發(fā)燒的事情。
【小題1】上個星期天我起床的時候感覺很好。去掉on 介詞多余。last Sunday morning 單獨作時間狀語。
【小題2】我決定到鄉(xiāng)村散步拍照片。此處take 與前面的go 并列。 took----take
【小題3】一切進展順利：形容詞、副詞誤用。此處用副詞修飾動詞went。
【小題4】語態(tài)誤用。由句意我沒有意識到天氣變壞了，此處用主動語態(tài)，所以去掉been。
【小題5】我開始跑，但是太遲了；連詞誤用。前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。 and---but
【小題6】我一直跑直到我跑到公共汽車站。時態(tài)誤用。全文是過去時態(tài)。get---got
【小題7】我到家不久，就發(fā)高燒了。have a high fever“發(fā)高燒”high 前加a;
【小題8】這讓我臥床一個星期。這是非限制性定語從句：it---which
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