Question

某英語(yǔ)雜志社舉辦“建設(shè)節(jié)約型校園”征文比賽。請(qǐng)針對(duì)目前許多校園內(nèi)部的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，寫一篇短文，號(hào)召同學(xué)們從我做起，杜絕浪費(fèi)。

浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象	危害	建議措施
1.水、電 2.餐廳食物 3.其它（由考生添加）	1.造成支出增加 2.浪費(fèi)自然資源 3.養(yǎng)成不良習(xí)慣	（考生自行發(fā)揮）

注意：
1、詞數(shù)：100-120詞。  
2、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3、不要逐字逐條翻譯。
4、標(biāo)題和第一句已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Building up a Saving Campus
Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice
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Answer 1

Building up a Saving Campus
Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice with the improvement of people’s living standard, how much is wasted on campus? For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, water running after washing dishes. In the dining-hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.
The habit of being wasteful has a bad effect on our character. We have to pay for those things wasted, and this adds to our expense. What is worse, we are wasting the earth’s limited resource. So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.
How to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody’s duty to save energy and resource. We must start with ourselves from now on! Then our society will go on developing and our life will bebetter.

考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題校園內(nèi)部的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，，要點(diǎn)是以表格的形式表示的，
要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，不能只是把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英語(yǔ)、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適
的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的
目的。In the dining-hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.
這句話用了過(guò)去分詞做賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)句型，So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.
這句話是用的虛擬語(yǔ)氣，還要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。For
example,In my opinion, What is worse等