分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Peter沉溺于網(wǎng)絡游戲不能自拔,甚至不聽父母勸阻想要離家出走.請根據(jù)以下要點提示,寫信勸他放棄這個想法.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:網(wǎng)癮的危害;要尊重父母并道歉;建議他管理好自己的時間.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:because of 由于;make such a decision作出決定;Addicted to 沉迷于;try every effort to努力去做;Therefore因此;Meanwhile同時;look forward to盼望;
I'm very sorry to hear that you have decided to leave home because of your conflict with your parents.(高分句型一)
Addicted to playing online games,you are not only wasting your valuable time but also hurting the feelings of your parents.(高分句型二)
Meanwhile,you should manage your time more wisely and find some meaningful ways to spend your free time.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Peter,
I'm very sorry to hear that you have decided to leave home because of your conflict with your parents.(高分句型一)
I think it's unwise to make such a decision.Addicted to playing online games,you are not only wasting your valuable time but also hurting the feelings of your parents.(高分句型二)Your parents love you so much that they are trying every effort to make your life better.Therefore,wouldn't it be reasonable for you to respect them,have a talk with them and apologize?Meanwhile,you should manage your time more wisely and find some meaningful ways to spend your free time.(高分句型三)
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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