Question

5．下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
There are many cars in our town．For a result，there are lots of traffic jams，and the air which we will breathe is terrible．Our town is very old but all the streets are quite narrow，so there is no room for bus lanes，which mean that buses always get stuck in the traffic jams，too．However，lots of accidents with cyclists often happen because of crowded street．But I think there is a simple solution of these problems．The government should close city center to all traffic except buses and bikes，and build very larger car parks outside the town．Car drivers can take a bus into the city center and arrive at work or the shops relaxing and in a good mood．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述作者所在的鎮(zhèn)有許多小車．由于街道狹窄，總是產(chǎn)生交通堵塞，引發(fā)許多事故．作者建議在鎮(zhèn)外建更大的停車場以緩解交通壓力．

解答 There are many cars in our town．For a result，there are lots of traffic jams，and the air which we will breathe is terrible．Our town is very old but all the streets are quite narrow，so there is no room for bus lanes，which mean that buses always get stuck in the traffic jams，too．However，lots of accidents with cyclists often happen because of crowded street．But I think there is a simple solution of these problems．The government should close∧city center to all traffic except buses and bikes，and build very larger car parks outside the town．Car drivers can take a bus into the city center and arrive at work or the shops relaxing and in a good mood．
詳解：
1．For改為As 考查介詞．a(chǎn)s a result意為"結(jié)果，因此"，是固定搭配．
2．去掉will 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．此處表示一般事實(shí)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
3．but改為and 考查連詞．前后兩個(gè)單句之間是順承關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用連詞and．
4．mean改為means 考查主謂一致．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞是前面整個(gè)句子，在定語從句中，謂語動(dòng)詞與先行詞在數(shù)上保持一致，句子作主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)形式．
5．However改為Besides 考查副詞．根據(jù)語境，此處表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，用副詞besides，而however表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．
6．street改為streets 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．street是可數(shù)名詞，表示不止一條街道，用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．of改為to 考查介詞．solution to意為"針對(duì)…的解決方案"，是固定搭配．
8．city center前加the 考查冠詞．city center表示特指，要加定冠詞the．
9．larger改為large 考查形容詞．此處沒有比較對(duì)象，要用形容詞原級(jí)．
10．relaxing改為relaxed 考查過去分詞． drivers與relax之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，用過去分詞作狀語．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．