Question

11．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤．對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾"√"；如有錯誤 （每行只有一處錯），則按下列情況改正：
    該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線 （\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
    該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 （^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
    該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
     注意：原行沒有錯的不要改．
    Chinese students celebrate their birthday in different ways，66．birthday改為birthdays
but  the most common way is to hold a birthday party，at that                    67．that改為which
friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the    68．√
birthday，one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from                     69．usual改為usually
others．Sometimes parents will prepare with a special dinner or                   70．with去掉
a cake to showing their love for their children．Since birthday                     7l．showing改為show
celebration is one of the important activities in one's life，they can             72．they改為it
be doing in meaningful ways．For example，we can buy a                            73．doing改為done
bunch of flowers or cook delicious meal for our mothers on that day.74．加a
Thus，we express our  thanks to our parents in return to their love.75．to改為for．

Answer 1

分析 中國的學(xué)生慶祝生日的方式各異，當(dāng)最常見的是舉辦生日聚會．聚會上朋友們一起開懷暢飲，唱歌跳舞．還可以收到別人的禮物和祝福．有時，父母會準備豐盛的晚餐或蛋糕來表達對孩子的愛．因為生日是一個人生活當(dāng)中重要的活動之一，可以用更有意義的方式來慶祝．例如，可以買束花或給父母做一頓飯來表達我們對他們愛的回報．

解答 Chinese students celebrate their birthday in different ways，
                                               birthdays
but  the most common way is to hold a birthday party，at that   
                                                                                    which
friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the   

birthday，one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from   
                     usually 
others．Sometimes parents will prepare with a special dinner or 
                                                          去掉
a cake to showing their love for their children．Since birthday 
              show
celebration is one of the important activities in one's life，they can 
                                                                                      it
be doing in meaningful ways．For example，we can buy a  
     done
bunch of flowers or cook∧delicious meal for our mothers on that day．
                                    加a
Thus，we express our  thanks to our parents in return to their love．
                                                                              for
1．birthday改為birthdays．句意表達的是復(fù)數(shù)．
2．that改為which．該句是一個非限制性定語從句，修飾名詞party，介詞后不能用that；at which相當(dāng)于where．
3．正確．
4．usual改為usually．修飾動詞要用副詞．
5．with去掉．prepare是及物動詞，不需要加介詞．
6．showing改為show．句中to show是目的狀語，要用動詞不定式．
7．they改為it．邏輯指代錯誤，句意指代的是birthday celebration．
8．doing改為done．句意表達的是被動．
9．加a．a(chǎn) delicious meal一頓可口的飯．
10．to改為for．句意表達的是目的，return to是歸還的意思．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識．常考的知識點有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關(guān)的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．