Question

【題目】假定你是大慶實驗中學的學生李健。最近，學校打算為同學們制作統(tǒng)一的校服，請你給閆校長寫一封建議信，要點如下：

1.寫信的目的；

2.對校服的布料，款式等提出建議并說明理由。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；

3. 開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Mr. Yan,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Jian

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Yan,

Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.

Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like. First of all, I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin. Second, it’s tiring to see the same clothes everywhere at school, so please let boys and girls have different uniforms. Third, I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. All students can vote and choose their favorite styles.

I’d be honored if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Jian

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類寫作，要點已給出，寫作時可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇英語書信，格式正確，內容齊全，布局合理，運用高級句子。Knowing that our school will order uniform for us, I am writing to make some suggestions.現在分詞作時間狀語；Our uniform is worn almost every day, so it would be great if you could understand what students like.并列句和條件句完美結合；I’d prefer it to be made of cotton because cotton feels soft and is good for our skin.原因狀語從句用在句中；I suggest that you provide four or five styles for us to choose from. suggest作“建議”講，后面的賓語從句用虛擬語氣（should）+動詞原形；另外，First of all，Second，Third，I’d be honored if的運用為文章增色添彩。