Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
Children in kindergarten are learning social skills. For this reason, it’s important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up. It’s up to parents, teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills.
Teaching kids to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground. For example, if a class has to make paper cutouts (剪下的圖樣), after cutting, have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket.
The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at this age. The rule is “One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself”. Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated. There are many answers, such as not being treated in bad manners. The teacher should explain that others don’t like to be scared, so you should not scare (使驚恐) others either.
Following the laws is good citizenship(公民義務(wù)). Proper games can be played in the classroom. Games have rules, and all students in the class should follow the rules of the games. If a child doesn’t want to follow, it is up to the teacher to explain them to the child. Teaching children about following rules should help them understand the need to obey the law when they become adults. 
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1． 以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；
2． 不少城市在創(chuàng)建文明城市。請(qǐng)以約120個(gè)詞談我們?nèi)绾纬蔀槲拿魇忻�。�?nèi)容包括：
（1） 你認(rèn)為文明市民 (a civilized citizen) 應(yīng)具備什么素質(zhì)，列舉兩三種文明行為；
（2） 作為中學(xué)生，談?wù)勀銘?yīng)如何從小事做起，為創(chuàng)建文明城市作貢獻(xiàn)。
【寫作要求】
1．可以使用實(shí)例來(lái)支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

Answer 1

The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens. Therefore, he suggests teaching children to pick up things by themselves, to respect others and follow the laws.
As far as I am concerned, a civilized citizen is supposed to respect others. In public places, such as restaurants, stations or hospitals, a civilized citizen would not speak or talk loudly. Besides, a civilized citizen ought to be always ready to reach out their helping hands. Last but not the least, a civilized citizen should be aware of the significance of obeying the law.
As a senior high school student, I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life. For example, I will pick up rubbish on the ground and put it into the dustbin. On my way to school, I will follow the traffic rules. All in all, I will do what I am expected to do. Only in this way can we make our hometown a more comfortable place for all of us to live in.

解析試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于如何做文明市民，要按照要點(diǎn)去表達(dá)，不能有遺漏，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時(shí)盡量使用自己會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens.這句話是用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，As a senior high school student, I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life. 這句話用的是what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句， Only in this way can we make our hometown a more comfortable place for all of us to live in.這句話用了倒裝句，還有范文還使用了一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞，As far as I am concerned, Besides, Last but not the least, For example,使文章更連貫。
考點(diǎn)：考查讀寫任務(wù)書面表達(dá)