Question

8．近十幾年，某市有越來越多的人選擇出境旅游．你的文章請(qǐng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

•描述圖表，進(jìn)行對(duì)照
•分析其中變化的原因
•談?wù)効赡墚a(chǎn)生的影響．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇圖表+提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文．描述圖表進(jìn)行對(duì)照，分析越來越多的人選擇出境旅游的原因并闡述可能產(chǎn)生的影響．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．描述圖表； 2．分析原因；3．闡述可能產(chǎn)生的影響．
重要短語：prefer to（更喜歡），over the last decade （在過去的十年里），a huge number of（很多），thanks to（多虧了，由于），pursue sth（追求），get tired of（因…勞累），scenic spots （旅游景點(diǎn)），when it comes to （當(dāng)談到，涉及到），at home and abroad（在國內(nèi)國外），have a negative impact on（對(duì)某事有消極的影響），be beneficial（有利的）．
【高分句型一】
1．The above table clearly mirrors an upward trend in the number of people who prefer to travel abroad over the last decade．
此處是關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"people"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語．
【高分句型二】
2．There are a huge number of reasons behind this phenomenon，of which the most important one is--China's booming economy．
此處是"of which+最高級(jí)"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"There are a huge number of reasons behind this phenomenon"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中指代"a huge number of reasons"．
【高分句型三】
3． Perhaps getting tired of visiting scenic spots at home，an increasing number of them choose foreign countries as their tour destinations．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語"getting tired of visiting scenic spots at home"作原因狀語，主句為"an increasing number of them choose foreign countries as their tour destinations"，主句的主語為"an increasing number of them"與所給動(dòng)詞"tire"存在邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系．
【高分句型四】
4．What really needs to occur is consumer education．
此處是由連接代詞"what"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，謂語動(dòng)詞為"is"，表語為"consumer education"．

解答 The above table clearly mirrors an upward trend in the number of people who prefer to travel abroad over the last decade．【高分句型一】In 1995，there are only 20 thousand tourists going overseas to take a trip．In 2000，the figure climbs to approximately 100 thousand，and peaks at 350 thousand in 2010．（描述圖表）
　　There are a huge number of reasons behind this phenomenon，of which the most important one is--China's booming economy．【高分句型二】Thanks to the deepening of reform and opening-up，people enjoy a sharp improvement in their living standards．They have enormous consuming power to pursue higher level of living quality．Perhaps getting tired of visiting scenic spots at home，an increasing number of them choose foreign countries as their tour destinations．【高分句型三】（分析原因）
　　When it comes to what impacts it would bring，in my eyes，it would give a huge boost to tour industry both at home and abroad．And it would give Chinese deeper insights into foreign cultures．Of course，the dark side of this phenomenon also exists．For instance，the uncivilized behavior of some Chinese tourists may have a negative impact on China's image．Anyway，overseas travel is beneficial．What really needs to occur is consumer education．【高分句型四】（闡述影響）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．