Question

假如你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友David發(fā)來(lái)e-mail說(shuō)，他想利用暑假來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)和武術(shù)，可是父母不同意，他對(duì)此事拿不定主意。請(qǐng)你給他回一封e-mail，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)并說(shuō)明理由。

注意：1、詞數(shù)120—150

2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I am glad to hear from you. In your e-mail you say that you are interested in Chinese and wushu and want to study in China . But your parents disagree and you have no idea about it.

I think you should come to China. Firstly, China has a long history and there are many traditional cultures. You can experience them by yourself. Secondly, you can improve your Chinese spoken ability by talking with Chinese people, because people here are warm-hearted, Thirdly, wushu is one of the traditional Chinese sports items, so come to China, and you will really appreciate the spirit of wushu.

I look forward to hearing from you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

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