Question

假如你是Li Hua，擔(dān)任學(xué)生會(huì)主席， 我校剛在10月10日舉行完首屆校園外語(yǔ)節(jié)，請(qǐng)你按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇英語(yǔ)稿，投遞到英文報(bào)，The 21^st Century。

     目    的：  為了豐富校園生活，提高同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的積極性，校學(xué)生會(huì)特舉辦首屆校園外語(yǔ)節(jié)。

     參賽形式：   以班級(jí)為單位參加。

     活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：   英文演講，英文歌曲和英語(yǔ)短劇比賽。

     活動(dòng)裁判：   本校英語(yǔ)教師和外教。

     活動(dòng)影響：   增強(qiáng)了學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的興趣等。

     參考詞匯：  Foreign Language Festival, English Speech Contest, English Playlets Competition

     注意：  詞數(shù)100左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Editor，

    On Oct.10^th, our school held the first Foreign Language Festival…. …

                                                          Yours sincerely,

                                                              Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Editor,

 On Oct.10^th,our school held the first Foreign Language Festival.It aimed to make campus life more colourful as well as to encourge students to study English.

     There were three activities during this festival—English Speech Contest,English Songs and English Playlets Competition. Each contestant from all the classes took part in them actively. And the judges consisted of our English teachers and foreign teachers.

      As the chairman of the Students’ Union, I was completely involved in the festival. In my opinion, this festival has been successfully organized. Also, the atmosphere of learning English has been well constructed. Moreover, it has effectively raised our awareness of cross-culture and teamwork. I hope such activities will be regularly held then.

                                                   Yours sincerely,

                                                        Li Hua   

【解析】本文是一篇稿子，首先要看清楚要求，外語(yǔ)節(jié)已經(jīng)過了，所以是太一定要用過去時(shí)，不能用將來(lái)時(shí)；另外，不要逐句翻譯，可以用連詞或從句來(lái)表示幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加自己舉辦這個(gè)外語(yǔ)節(jié)的感受以及表達(dá)自己的希望。