Question

以Smoking Is Harmful為題，寫一篇60-80詞的短文，分析現(xiàn)狀、原因，列舉吸煙的害處，勸告人不要吸煙，要戒煙等。 參考詞匯：對……有害處do harm to/be harmful to戒煙stop smoking/give up smoking

Smoking Is Harmful

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Answer 1

Smoking Is Harmful

When you are in public places, you will see many smokers. And most of them are young people and even middle school students. It is said that in China smokers cover about 45 percent.

Why do so many people enjoy smoking? Some people think it is a pleasure, some believe that it can refresh them. In fact, smoking is a bad habit. It does great harm to our health, not only to the smoker himself, but also to others. For smokers, it is a great waste of money, and causes all kinds of diseases .Besides, many fires are caused by careless smokers.

Today, more and more people are beginning to realise the harm of smoking and decide to give it up. If you are not a smoker, don't start.

【解析】

試題分析：對于談觀點的文章，注意觀點要明確，可以用一些連詞，介詞或動詞詞組等，如not only…but also…，even，in fact, besides，decide to，begin to 開始做…….決定做……對……有害處do harm to/be harmful to戒煙stop smoking/give up smoking。注意題目所給的信息，不可遺漏，必要時可以多進行一些補充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。結(jié)構(gòu)上：可采取總分模式。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點說明】When you are in public places, you will see many smokers. 時間狀語從句，提升文章檔次。It is said that in China smokers cover about 45 percent.用確切的數(shù)字，是文章更有說服力。Why do so many people enjoy smoking? 提出疑問，引出后文，是行文更流暢。Some people think it is a pleasure, some believe that it can refresh them. not only to the smoker himself, but also to others.分別舉例說明，層次，邏輯更加清晰，突出重點。.Besides, many fires are caused by careless smokers.增加文章的可信度。Today, more and more people are beginning to realise the harm of smoking and decide to give it up.寫明現(xiàn)狀，具有號召性。 If you are not a smoker, don't start. if 引導的條件狀語從句，提升文章檔次。

考點：考查議論文的寫作。