Question

目前，許多學(xué)校存在部分學(xué)生抄襲作業(yè)現(xiàn)象。現(xiàn)在就這個話題談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />主要原因：作業(yè)量大、偏難；對功課不感興趣、懶惰；完成任務(wù)，取悅老師。
個人看法：抄襲不對，違反校規(guī)；要誠實，勤奮學(xué)習(xí)；有困難可以請教老師和同學(xué)。
注意：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮。 
2. 短文標題與開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。    
3. 詞數(shù)：150 左右。
My opinion on copying others’ homework
As is known to us all, some students copy others’ homework.___________
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Answer 1

My opinion on copying others’ homework
As is known to us all, some students copy others’ homework.
As students, we have to do plenty of homework both at school and at home, but sometimes we have too much homework which is too difficult for us. On the other hand, some students are lazy, and are not interested in their lessons, nor do they work hard. So in order to finish the homework and please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.
In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the rules of the school. We should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. If you have trouble doing your homework, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help.

試題分析：本文的寫作首先對存在的作業(yè)抄襲的現(xiàn)象進行說明As is known to us all, some students copy others’ homework.然后對學(xué)生抄襲作業(yè)的原因進行分別說明，作業(yè)量大、偏難have too much homework which is too difficult for us；對功課不感興趣、懶惰；完成任務(wù)，取悅老師So in order to finish the homework and please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.這樣的表達都恰到好處的表現(xiàn)了作者的語言功底。進而表達自己的觀點，并提出我們應(yīng)該誠實，盡我們自己最大的努力來完成作業(yè)We should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying.最后表達如果有問題可以多問老師向老師尋求幫助ask your classmates or teachers for help.
點評：本文屬于主旨類文章，在寫的過程中首先對存在的現(xiàn)象進行說明，然后表達自己的觀點。對于普遍存在的現(xiàn)象可以用as we all know,來總起句子，發(fā)表自己的觀點時注意層次的把握，運用“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的連詞來表達各點，同時利用平時積累的各類表遞進、并列的連詞來使文章富于活力。在平時的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對表達好的句子，短語要進行積累，并默寫，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無患。