Question

寫(xiě)作（25分）

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生張華,班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)李明,他一時(shí)無(wú)法融入新的班集體中,感到很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封信:

1. 幫他分析原因

2. 給他提出建議

3. 陳述你幫助他的具體打算

Dear Li Ming,

I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class.__________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. Therefore it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally.

I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. To start with, you may as well learn to speak Putonghua, well understood by all the Chinese. Besides, comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.

In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you. I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.

Best regards,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。要求用英文根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給從外地轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)李明寫(xiě)一封信。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，信件要點(diǎn)包括：幫他分析原因，給他提出建議，陳述你幫助他的具體打算，審題時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates.使用了表語(yǔ)從句，還有comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.用了動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫Therefore ，Besides等。

考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)信類(lèi)短文寫(xiě)作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：書(shū)信類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。