Question

你堂兄建華在國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)，你們經(jīng)常用英文通信。他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，不久前來(lái)信就是否回國(guó)工作征求你的意見。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示回信：

建議他回國(guó)；

你的理由是：⑴ 學(xué)有所用，就業(yè)容易；

               ⑵ 照顧父母。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.行文應(yīng)連貫，內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整；

      3. 開頭語(yǔ)與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

June 8th

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

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Best wishes,

                                      Yours,

                                      Minghua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?

Best wishes,

Minghua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。要點(diǎn)和信的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔但也不乏好的詞組和句型：In my opinion,在我看來(lái)，hope to希望做…， I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. 這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句，It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. 這句話也是用it做形式主語(yǔ)。還有范文還使用了For one reason,  For another reason,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。

考點(diǎn)：書信類作文