Question

某英文報社準備刊發(fā)一篇題為“Living in the City”的有關城市生活利和弊的文章，根據下面提示，寫一篇詞數100左右的短文，可做適當發(fā)揮。

Advantages	Disadvantages
找工作容易	生活消費高
交通便利	人口多，擁擠
有公園、飯店等休閑場所	空氣污染，居住環(huán)境差

（說明：書面表達必須采用如下標準答題卡，并引導考生養(yǎng)成規(guī)范答題習慣）

Answer 1

Living in the City
Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages.
It is often easier to find jobs. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.
However, living in the city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job; otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What’s more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：要求寫一篇題為“Living in the City”的有關城市生活利和弊的文章，寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，這篇文章的要點是以表格的形式給出的，要點很詳細，考生只要靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】這篇范文一個很大的亮點是句式多變：Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages.這句話是動名詞做主語， It is often easier to find jobs. 這句話是it做形式主語， there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see.這句話用了不定式做定語， You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax.這句話用了讓步狀語從句， You must find a well-paid job; otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do.這句話用了定語從句， It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside. 這句話用了定語從句。另外，范文還使用了Besides, However, What’s more,這樣的關聯詞，使文章更加連貫。